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    Baljeet Singh Virk 1 year ago
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    Beautiful.
    And when they fly
    Children try to grab them high
    Some are successful
    And some again try

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    Swaraj Raj 1 year ago
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    Thanks Sir. Your comment itself is poetic.

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      Dhiraj Sharma 1 year ago
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      Wah wah Dr Sahib..excellent.. . Gulzar calls it triveni.. Similar to this he brings home the meaning in three short lines!

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        Swaraj Raj 1 year ago
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        Thank you so much, Dr. Sahib.

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    Tarlochan Singh Anand 1 year ago
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    Brevity, thou art personified in Swaraj

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      Swaraj Raj 1 year ago
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      Thank you so much, Sir.

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